Poetry

Yesterday we worked on some acrostic poems for our page about P4/2 keep a look out for them coming soon.We did one about Mrs Mackay too.

We also worked on one together about the weather -it was a really stormy day and we had a severe weather warning for where we live. Mrs Mackay, Mrs Lemmon and Mrs Milne think it is fantastic – we worked really hard and Mrs Mackay wrote it out on a white board-here it is.

STORMY WEATHER

Snowflakes swirling

Trees rustling

Outside looks wild

Rain lashing down

My jacket is warm

You had better wrap up

Wind howling , whistling

Everyone rushing home

Another horrid night

Thunder banging

Hailstones bouncing

Everything crashing about

Red sky in the morning,shepherd’s warning.

Please let us know what you think.

Evening

 Evening comes with water dripping.

Evening comes with owls hooting.

Evening comes with birds chirping.

Evening comes with hamster rustling.

Evening comes with foxes howling.

Evening comes with children crying.

Evening comes with door bells ringing.

Evening comes with me going to sleep.

Emma and Anna Ross

  Evening comes with trains rattling.

Evening comes with owls hooting.

Evening comes with cars zooming.

Evening comes with baby crying.

Evening comes with rain lashing.

Evening comes with hedge hogs snorting.

Evening comes I am falling asleep.  

Kayleigh, Daniel and Callen  

  Evening comes with Stairs creaking.

Evening comes with Kettle whistling.

Evening comes with voices murmuring.

Evening comes with cars zooming.

Adrian Lauren K Zoe  

 Evening comes with lights clicking.

Evening comes with dogs barking.

Evening comes with toast popping.

Evening comes to put me asleep.

Evening comes with baby crying.

Evening comes with cars zooming.

Evening comes with toilet flushing.

Evening comes with fridge opening.

Evening comes with people playing football.

Callum G and Nathan C 

  Evening comes with lightning crashing.

Evening comes with door bells ringing.

Evening comes with owls hooting.

Evening comes with visitors talking.

Evening comes with water dripping.

Evening comes with dogs barking.

Zara and Rebecca 

Evening comes with doors creaking.

Evening comes with people talking.

Evening comes with clocks ticking.

Evening comes with fire burning.

Evening comes with lightning crashing.

Evening comes with sounds.

Grigor and Leila

  Evening comes with mice squeaking.

Evening comes with wind howling.

Evening comes with dishwashers washing.

Evening comes with mum chatting.

Evening comes with engines running.

Evening comes with doors slamming.

Evening comes so we can rest.

Fiona, Anna and Chloe.